First task is me11!!!!!!

[Moe]

This is my new music it is a fairly new draft.

Please check back often and if you have myspace invite me as freind and spread the word!!

www.myspace.com/firsttask

[Maximal]

In my personal opinion that sucked, but...I SAID BUT SO JUST CALM DOWN...

It isn't a style of music that I listen to so Go for it and good for you...trying new things and moving forward with your dreams.

[Moe]

In my personal opinion that sucked, but...I SAID BUT SO JUST CALM DOWN...

It isn't a style of music that I listen to so Go for it and good for you...trying new things and moving forward with your dreams.

Thank you very very much sir, to be honest with you I am not totally into rap myself yet i do it for these reasons:

a)i love to perform but cant sing
b)the beats are easy as hell to make
c)it is popular
d)it is fun and easy to write the lyrics

[Makya]

I agree with Max. It just wasn't all that. If you are only doing rap because it's easy, popular and you can't sing, then you are in the wrong business. I'm not trying to be mean, I'm only saying this because I used the sing for a band and it's a dog eat dog world out there. The goal is to push yourself and set yourself goals to make. Sure it's going to be hard, but the rewards are so much sweeter when you break your back making it and people praise you left and right because the piece you did kicks some serious ass. A good song is one that can make the hairs on your arm stand straight up and send shivers down your spine. And as for not having the voice, everyone has a voice to sing with. The catch of it is, finding the songs that suit your voice. You may not be suited to sing one particular song, but you could be very well suited for a different one. If I am making any sense. For example, I can't sing anything that is a baritone, but I can sing a tenor or a low alto. Therefor I picks songs to sing that suit my voice. And when I do sing, I can sing the song quite well.

Am I making any sense or am I just blowing smoke out my ass.

[SSgt Shak]

puff... puff.... give....

[lilmamma]

i acaully thought is was pretty good. need to tone down the vocals bring the music up a bit...i loved the beat and the lyrics...but the voices were a bit loud almost turns u off of it but other than that i liked it..i honestly think from the first time i heard one of your songs you have come a long way and i think they just keep getting better...i cant wait to hear the mtw rap oh yeah not to be a smartass but u deff have to say somthing about me being trailer trash U HAVE TOO but over all i ve it 1 thumb up...tweak it a lil bit, work ont he music volume and tone the vocals down.....let me know when u do i would like to hear it agin

[Moe]

new song feedback please!

[NurseNancy]

I actually liked it. I listen to rap sometimes - I love all kinds of music. I agree with Lil...tone down on the vocals, its too overpowering. Otherwise...good job! Look forward to hearing more.

[EvilTwin]

I like rap...but I think that sucked.

[Kase]

Well, since you seem to like composing, but not singing, maybe you should try techno or electronica or something *shudders*...eh... just make sure if you do and you post it you let everyone know first...
Otherwise, I have to agree with the majority so far... I'm fairly open minded, too, except for country music (sorry, I just can't stand it, I don't know why)